Question

十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。张华将参加比赛，请你以张华的名义写一篇100字左右的英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：

品质	善良，善待动物；勤劳，做额外的事
爱好	看关于动物的书籍；有空时去观鸟
事迹	收养无家可归的小动物；为Save China’s Tigers 筹款
感悟	动物是人类的朋友；保护动物就是保护我们自己
打算	……(至少两点)

提示：额外的extra ,收养adopt, 无家可归homeless

Save China’s Tigers 拯救中国虎（一个慈善机构）

I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.

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If I can be a volunteer,________________________________________________________

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Thank you for listening !

 

Answer 1

I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.

I am kind to not only others but also animals. I am also hard—working and don’t mind doing extra work. I like reading books about animals. I often go birdwatching in my free time. I also do something useful for animals. When I see homeless animals，I will adopt and take good care of them. Once I raised money for Save China’s tigers. I know animals are our friends. Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.

If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.I will tell more people to love animals .

Thank you for listening !

【解析】

试题分析：本文是个演讲稿，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语：take good care of照顾某人 work harder 努力工作mind doing介意做某事 raised money for为。。筹集钱。I am kind to not only others but also animals.这个句话中用not only ,but also 来连接两个并列的名词。Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.这个句子中提到动名词做主语。If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals这个句子中有if来引导条件状语从句，and连接work,do并列谓语动词，to protect animals表示目的状语。

考点： 提纲类作文。