Question

【题目】请你写一篇作文，描写你的家乡近几年来的变化。从马路，建筑物，商店，旅游等方面进行描述。 ( 不少于80词 )

过去，我的家乡是个贫穷的小镇，但是河水清澈，空气清新。人们住在低矮的屋子里。人们常常步行或骑自行车去镇里。

在过去的几年中， 我的家乡发生了很大变化。多数人搬进了公寓。马路变宽了，超市也多了。人们可以坐公共汽车或打的去镇里。但是空气不如以前新鲜了，树也没以前多了。人们意识到保护环境是很重要的。

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient, but the mountains were greener, water much cleaner. They enjoyed a clearer sky .Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to town. But the air is not as fresh as before, so are the trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future..

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍家乡的变化。根据内容提示，可能会用到过去时态（used to do ：过去常常）和一般现在时。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态以及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点： 这篇短文主要取材于学生身边发生的事。在行文过程中，多用简单句，同时使用一些固定句式和短语，如： used to、the mountains were greener, water much cleaner、great changes have taken place、live a better life、as fresh as、so are the trees等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。