Question

作文（20分）

请以“My best friend”为题，根据下列要点提示写一篇作文：

1、Daniel, 13岁，阳光中学七年级一班。

2、戴着眼镜，个子不高。

3、经常做运动，很少吃汉堡和喝可乐。

4、对画画很感兴趣。没有很多时间玩电脑游戏。

5、他家附近有一个购物中心，他经常周末在那里购物，并且他认为那是娱乐的好地方。

6、现在他穿了一件紫色的T-恤和一条灰色裤子，看起来很酷。

注意：

1，词数100词左右。

2，短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

My best friend

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Answer 1

My best friend

My best friend is Daniel. He is 13 years old. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is short and wears glasses. He is wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans today. He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle. He often exercises and he seldom has hamburgers and coke. He thinks they are bad for his health. He is interested in drawing. And he likes playing computer games too. He doesn’t have much time to play computer games. There is a shopping mall near his home. He often goes shopping there. And he thinks it’s a good place to have fun. Now he is wearing a purple T-shirt and a pair of grey trousers. He looks cool.

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍了自己的朋友，所以句子应该用一般现在时，句子的主语应该用第三人称单数，短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如He has a healthy lifestyle. he likes playing computer games too. he thinks it’s a good place to have fun. He often goes shopping there.等，用了一些连词and等。增加了文章的亮点。

考点：提纲类作文。