Question

【题目】书面表达。

许多外国友人要到宿迁游玩，请根据以下要点写一篇介绍该城市60词的短文：

1.古老的城市，干净，空气新鲜。

2.有很多花和树，能闻花香，听鸟唱歌。也有很多园林（garden）, 很美丽。有湖和河，能钓鱼。

3.购物方便，吃到很多美食。

4.这里人乐于助人，有困难容易得到帮助。

5.是宜居城市，欢迎来宿迁。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Suqian is an old city. It is very clean. The air is fresh. There are a lot of flowers and trees. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There are many beautiful gardens here. There are rivers and lakes, too. You can go fishing. You can buy very nice things here and the food is nice. People here are kind and helpful. You can get help if you have problems. Suqian is a good place to live. Welcome to Suqian. You will have a good time here.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要向游客介绍宿迁的情况。主要涉及宿迁的美丽环境，生活情况及当地民风。写作时注意英语语言结构和汉语的不同，不要写成汉式英语，注意there be句式的使用。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。句式富于变化，如：There are rivers and lakes, too.，You can get help if you have problems.，Suqian is a good place to live.等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。