Question

【题目】写作：(满分15分)

根据所给图画和文字提示，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

要求：1. 完整叙述图画内容。可以适当发挥，内容积极向上。

2. 语句通顺，时态正确，书写工整。

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

参考词汇：小偷 thief 偷：steal(stole)

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Answer 1

【答案】

One day, it was raining hard when Li Hua hurried to school.He ran to the bus stop and got on a bus. There were many people on the bus so it was very crowded. Suddenly. he saw a thief steal a lady's money. Without thinking twice, Li Hua went up and shouted,“Stop!”The thief was afraid.He got off the bus and ran away. Some people ran after him as quickly as possible. Finally, the thief was caught and sent to the police station. The police and other people all praised Li Hua and he felt very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1. 认真读图，可知四幅图描述的是在公交车上抓小偷的故事，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。要充分利用。

写作亮点：本文用一般过去时，清楚地讲述了某一天发生的故事。按事件发生的顺序及图片顺序，把匆忙上学，车上阻盗，下车追贼，警察表扬的过程叙述得清楚明白，动词运用恰当，时态运用准确。文章末尾，警察表扬，李华感到高兴，画龙点睛，主旨鲜明。