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【题目】书面表达

这周末，一些大学生将来到阳光社区中心进行服务活动。请你根据提示给居民写一张告示，介绍服务活动内容。词数70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。要点如下：

1．他们将分享他们的一技之长。将帮我们解决各种问题。

2．他们中一些擅长电脑，如果你的电脑有故障，可请他们检测；

3.一些是医生，如果我们感觉不舒服，可以从他们那得到帮助。

4. 他们都很乐意给我们出好主意。

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Dear all,

Some college students will come to our community centre this weekend.

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Sunshine Community Centre

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Dear all,

Some college students will come to our community centre this weekend.

They will share their different skills. They will help us with all kinds of problems. Some of them are good at computers. If there’s something wrong with your computer, you can ask them to check it. Some of them are doctors. If we don't feel well, we can get help from them.

They are all happy to give us some good ideas.

Sunshine Community Centre

【解析】

试题分析：本文给居民写一张告示，介绍本周末一些大学生将来到阳光社区中心的服务活动内容。所以格式必须用布告的格式，句子的主语应该用第三人称，要注意上下文的衔接，不要遗漏要点，不要出现语法错误。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：They will share their different skills. They will help us with all kinds of problems. Some of them are good at computers. If there’s something wrong with your computer, you can ask them to check it. If we don't feel well, we can get help from them.用了if引导的条件状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。