题目内容
【题目】书面表达:
以A Trip to the Zoo为题目,根据以下提示写一篇60词左右的小短文。
上星期天,天气晴朗,你和你的朋友一起去了动物园。
1. 动物园距离你家15公里;
2. 乘坐公共汽车;
3. 早上9点出发,9点40时到达;下午4点返回;
4. 在动物园的见闻;拍照;感受。
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【答案】
It was sunny last Sunday. I went to the zoo with my friends. The zoo is 15 kilometres away from my home. So we went there by bus. We started at 9:00 a.m and we arrived at 9:40 a.m. There were many people in the zoo. I saw some children playing with the monkeys. We were very happy and took many pictures . We came back at 4:00 p.m. I had a great time .
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般过去时态进行叙述。
写作亮点:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。There were many people in the zoo;We were very happy and took many pictures等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。