题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你的网友想要了解你们社区的情况,请根据以下要点回一分电子邮件,字数80字左右。
要点:
1.我们社区很现代。有各种俱乐部帮助我们。生病了可以去社区医院。
2.老人孩子最喜欢花园,可以在那锻炼还可以跳舞。
3.社区所有人友善而乐于助人。他们分享自己的一技之长,
空余时间帮助人们解决各种问题。
4.我们很幸运有这样的社区。我们就像一个大家庭。
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【答案】
Our community is very modern. There are all kinds of clubs to help us. People can go to the Community Hospital if they are ill/sick. Old people and children like the garden best. They can exercise and dance there. All the people in the community are kind and helpful. They share their different skills. They help people with all kinds of problems in their free time. We are lucky to have a community like this. We are like a big family.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍自己生活的社区,题目中已给出了具体的写作内容,如社区的设施、人们可以做点什么、社区的人如何等,我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。要注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,使用正确的词汇、句型和语法。通过分析可知,这篇作文我们应主要使用一般现在时态,要注意谓语动词和主语形式上的一致,正确使用be动词和其他动词。写作时,不要遗漏要点,将相关内容用正确的连词连接,使文意连贯。还可以使用一些好的词语和句型,使文章的表达流畅,提高表现力。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求,介绍了自己的社区。首先,这篇短文内容完整,包含了题目中的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。各个要点之间衔接紧密,意思连贯;其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法、词汇都很准确,符合英语的表达习惯,使用了很多短语和句式,而且句式丰富,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏感。作文中比较好的句型有There are all kinds of clubs to help us、All the people in the community are kind and helpful. 、They share their different skills. 、They help people with all kinds of problems in their free time、We are lucky to have a community like this等。
【题目】根据句子意思,从方框中选用恰当的单词或短语序号填空。
A.with pleasure, B. made up of, C. such as, D.all year round, E.so much for |
【1】The park is __________ five parts.
【2】Kunming is a good place to visit, you can go there __________.
【3】Jim likes many sports, ________ running and skating.
【4】OK, ________today’s fashion show. Let’s have a talk on Project Hope.
【5】-- –Tom, could you help me with my English?
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