Question

【题目】书面表达

如果你有很多钱，你怎样使用这些钱？请根据所给的提示词， 以 If I have a lot of money, I will …为题写一篇不少于70词的短文，可适当发挥。

提示词：：

1. a big house, parents , a happy life

2. build a Hope School, help poor children, go to school, get an education

3. give, old people’s home , make their life better

4. travel , around the world, with family or friends

If I have a lot of money, I will________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

If I have a lot of money

If I have a lot of money, I will travel around the world with my family because I like traveling very much.

If I have a lot of money, I will buy a big house and live in it with my parents because I don't want to live alone. I will buy a car, too. So I can go everywhere with my parents easily. We will have a happy life.

If I have a lot of money, I will give some to the charities to help poor students. Because most of them are poor, they can't go to school. With my help I think they will get a good education. And I will be happy to see that.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。由于本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。

写作亮点：该文语句流畅，段落清晰。语句的表达符合英语的表达习惯。