Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将举行初中英语征文比赛，主题是介绍你的朋友Nick，请你根据下列要点完成征文。

1. 勤奋而有耐心，总是乐于助人，经常帮同学辅导数学难题。

2. 我7岁时就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告诉他。

4. 他痴迷于自己动手做，他喜欢修坏了的东西。

5. 他妈妈的生日要到了，他决定……

注意：短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；第5 要点的内容须用1～2句话作适当发挥；词数70个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. His mother is sure to like it.

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything.等等。