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【题目】寒假快要到了,为自己设计一个旅行计划,要包括下列问题

1. 想去哪?为什么?2. 想在那儿待几天?3. 怎么去?为什么?

4. 打算什么时候开始旅行?独自一人还是与别人同去?

5. 在这次旅行期间,打算做些什么?

要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在60~70之间。

A travel plan

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【答案】The winter holiday is coming .I want to go to Beijing to spend my holiday.Because there are many famous places and many interesting places in it. I love Beijing a lot.I will stay in Beijing for three weeks.I am going there by plane.I will start my trip next week.It's very wonderful if my parents go with me.

I will visit the Great Wall,the Palace Museum,the Summer Palace and so on.I'll take many photos so that I can show them to my friends..Also,I'm going to take a walk in Beijing Hutong.That must be very relaxing.

What a wonderful trip!I can't wait!

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息,写出寒假旅游计划。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且关于介绍时所使用的词汇和句型,是学生们比较熟悉的,所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以了。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。

温馨提示:请考生仔细审题,不要遗漏信息,也不要出现单词拼写错误啊!

写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,给我们介绍自己的旅行计划,结构清晰,要点全面。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达,这一点很好。语言合乎英语的表达规范.作者还使用了一些较好的句式,增强了文章的连贯性。如动词不定式to spend my holiday, It's very wonderful if my parents go with me. That must be more relaxing. What a wonderful trip等。

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【题目】Computers are useful machines. They can help people a lot in their everyday life. For example they can help people save much time and they can help people work out many problems they can’t do easily. Our country asks everyone to learn to use computers except the old people.

Today more and more families own computers. Parents buy computers for their children.

They hope computers can help them improve(提高)their studies in school. Yet many of the children use computers to play games to watch video or to sing Karaoke instead of studying. So many teachers and parents complain (抱怨) that computers can not help children to study but make them fall behind. So computers are locked by parents in the boxes.

In some other countries even some scientists hate computers. They say computers let millions of people lost their jobs or bring them a lot of trouble.

Will computers really bring trouble to people or can they bring people happiness? It will be decided by people themselves.

【1】 Why do we say the computer is a useful machine? Because _______________.

A. our country asks us to learn it

B. it can help us a lot

C. we can use it to play games

D.it can help us to find jobs

【2】 What do many teachers and parents complain about? _______________.

A. Their students and children use computers to play games.

B. Computers let them lost their jobs.

C. Computers make the students and children fall behind.

D. Computers bring people a lot of trouble.

【3】In this passage we know computers _______________.

A. also bring us trouble

B. bring us happiness only

C. are hated by people

D. are bad for people’s health

【4】 Can computers really help children to study? _______________.

A. Yes they can. B. It’s hard to say

C. No they can’t. D. Of course not.

【5】 How do you understand the last sentence of this passage? I think it means _______.

A. computers are used by people

B. people can live well without computers

C. one must decide how to use computers

D. computers are strange machines

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