题目内容
【题目】书面表达(15分)
假如Peter是你的笔友,请根据下列表格所提供的信息, 写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况。要求:60词左右,可适当发挥。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name | Peter |
From | America |
Age | twelve years old |
Looks | head: big hair: short, blond eyes: small, blue |
Clothes | a white T-shirt, blue pants |
Favorite | color: blue food: hamburgers animals: lions |
Timetable | get up: 6:40 a.m. go to school: 7:15 a.m. have dinner: 6:30 p.m. |
Peter is my pen pal.
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【答案】
Peter is my pen pal.I am very glad to introduce my best friend Peter to you.He is from America.He is twelve years old.His head is big.He has short blond hair.He has blue eyes,but they are small.He always wears a white T-shirt and blue pants.His favorite color is blue.Hamburgers are his favourite food.His favourite animals are lions.He often gets up at 6:40a.m.Then he goes to school at 7:15a.m.He often has dinner at 6:40 p.m.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇列提纲式的给材料作文。所给材料十分详细,写作时注意时态和人称代词的正确。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如He always wears a white T-shirt and blue pants.His favorite color is blue.Hamburgers are his favourite food.His favourite animals are lions.