Question

根据以下有关Leo的个人情况介绍，以Leo Smith 为题，写一篇介绍他的短文。

要求：用第三人称;用词在60~80 之间;所给信息必须全部用上。

Name: Leo Smith	Age: 15
Address: 69 Park Road	New YorkNationality: American
Occupation（职业）: student	Favourite subjects: art and P.E.
Weekday activities: swimming and working	Usual Saturday activity: having parties
Usual Sunday activity: watching TV

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

   Leo Smith is an American boy.He is fifteen years old.He lives at 69 Park Road New York with his parents.Leo is a student in No.4 High School.On weekdays, he studies very hard.Art and P.E.are his favourite subjects.In his spare time, he likes doing sports.He usually goes swimming three times a week.On Saturdays, he often has parties.He likes making friends and they always enjoy themselves.After a week’s hard work, he likes staying at home and watching TV on Sundays.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合，更能加强作品的可读性。

【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。这是一篇给材料作文，根据所提供的信息，介绍他人，介绍别人要用第三人称，作者在写作中，介绍了姓名、年龄、出处以及他一天所从事活动，语句通顺、符合逻辑。

考点：提纲作文。