Question

请根据以下提示，以“Tom's lifestyle”为题，写一篇不少于100词的短文。

提示：1，Tom今年13岁，是我们班的尖子生，但身体不太好；2．他经常吃汉堡、鸡肉和冰淇淋，但很少吃蔬菜和水果；3．他各顿饭之间还吃甜点，很少运动；4．他觉得是改变他的饮食习惯和生活方式的时候了；5．他打算每天跑步30分钟，每周游泳两次；多吃蔬菜，多喝水，因为水是最好的饮料，它不含有热量。

Tom's lifestyle

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Tom's lifestyle

Tom is 13 years old. He is a top student in our class, but he is not healthy. He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn't like sports. He feels that it's time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to run for 30 minutes every day and go swimming twice a week. He wants to eat more vegetables and drink much water, because water is the best drink. It has no calories.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍汤姆的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is ......， He often eats......；及He wants to......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了汤姆不健康的生活方式，接下来介绍此处用了 between meals，it's time for him to，plans to，every day 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。