Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

随着车辆的增加，城市交通越来越拥挤。假如你叫李敏，前不久和同学们一起讨论了the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes。现在请你根据他们的观点和你自己的观点，给你 的外籍老师Susan 写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。

Advantages	Disadvantages	My opinion
Protect the environment	It’s slower than buses and cars
Be good for our health	It’s not suitable for a long trip
It’s cheap

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Susan,

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes recently.

Some students think it is useful. First of all, it is good to protect the environment. Second, riding a bike usually is good for our health. And for the last, it’s cheaper to buy a bike than a car. However, others have different opinions. In their opinion, it’s slower than buses and cars. What’s more, it’s not suitable for a long trip. It’s tiring. I think we should use bikes as much as possible. Because it’s an environmentally friendly way of transport. Further more，it’s proper exercise to ride bikes for about 30 minutes to an hour.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。主要阐述讨论会上的不同的观点，并阐述自己的看法。描述几天的讨论会用过去时态，描述各种不同的观点可以用一般现在时。写作时不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接。

【亮点说明】这篇短文开门见山地点明所要阐述的内容。并分析了不同的观点，阐明理由。层次清楚条理清晰。最后归纳总结。虽然基本上是简单句但是经过作者适当的连词的应用使文章紧凑，合理，表达非常清楚。

考点：表格作文。