Question

【题目】书面表达

现在是星期六上午11点整，Grace一家人（爷爷，奶奶，爸爸， 妈妈，哥哥和Grace）都在做自己的事情。请展开想象并用英语写一篇短文，介绍Grace的家人此刻的活动。

要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名；

2. 语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Now it is 11 o’clock on the morning of Saturday. The Grace’s family are at home. His grandpa is reading newspaper and his grandma is cleaning the living room. His mother preparing lunch for them. His father is fixing their car. Grace is doing his homework in his bedroom. His brother is playing computer games. They have fun doing their things. So this is a happy family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Grace一家在星期六上午11点正在做的事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查现在进行时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：it is...；His grandpa is...; Grace is...; So this is ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Grace一家正在家里，接下来介绍他们正在做的事，最后总结这是一个幸福的家庭。此处at home, prepare sth for sb, do one’s homework, play computer games, have fun doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。