题目内容
【题目】书面表达
根据下面提示,用英语介绍你的美国朋友.Jim.。
1.Jim家里学校6千米,他通常6:10分起床,锻炼三十分钟,洗澡,吃早饭后骑车去学校
有时会乘公交。
2. 父亲在医院工作,医院离家很远,通常会开车去工作,在医院吃午饭,晚上通常到家很晚。
3.母亲在银行工作,早上起床很早,为家人准备早餐,每天大约花30分钟乘地铁去上班。
My friend
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【答案】
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my friend Jim to you. Jim is an American. His home is 6 kilometers from school. So he usually gets up at 6:10. Then he exercises for thirty minutes and takes a shower. After he has breakfast he rides his bike to school. Sometimes he takes a bus. His father works in a hospital. The hospital is very far from home. His father usually goes to work by car. He has his lunch at hospital and goes home very late. His mother works in a bank. She gets up very early every morning and cooks breakfast for the family. It usually takes her 30 minutes to work by subway.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据提示介绍一下自己的美国朋友Jim的情况,题目中给我们列出了写作的内容,非常详细,我们可以按照这个提纲,逐条的用正确的英语将他们翻译出来。当然翻译时,我们要注意语言的准确,符合英语的表达习惯。另外,我们还要使用好的句型和短语,使文章表达流畅,使文意衔接自然。通过分析可知,这篇作文我们应该主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称单数形式来叙述,因此我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词形式的变化,要用第三人称单数形式,而且这一形式几乎贯穿了整个短文。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文。首先,这篇短文的内容非常完整,作者将题目要求的所有内容都表达了出来,没有遗漏要点,各个部分之间的衔接也很自然;其次这篇短文的结构非常好,有层次,先给我们介绍了Jim的情况,接下来介绍的是他的父母的情况;最后这篇短文中使用了一些连词,使得文章的内容紧密衔接,过渡自然。另外短文中还使用了正确的人称和时态,特别是注意了动词第三人称单数的形式变化。文章中较好的句型有:His home is 6 kilometers from school. So he usually gets up at 6:10.、Sometimes he takes a bus、It usually takes her 30 minutes to work by subway.等。
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【题目】Chai Jing who once worked as a journalist of China Central Television. Now, she is more popular with Chinese people. Because she presented a self-funded documentary about smog in Beijing, Feb 28, 2015. She made the documentary inspire by her sick daughter who was diagnosed(诊断) with a tumor (肿瘤)as a fetus(胎儿) and have an operation as a new-born baby.
"I saw smog through my daughter's eyes," Chai said while presenting her film. She recounted
how the little girl was confined indoors, patting the window to vent her frustration at being unable to play outside.
Chai said she hopes the 103-minute film will serve as an answer to three questions about
smog – what is smog, where does it come from and what to do about it.
"Under the Dome", The smog documentary was made by Chai Jing has been watched more than 17 million times on Youku and has become a popular discussion in the whole country and many people discuss on online, too.
The name of the film | 【1】 . |
What’s the film about? | 【2】 . 【3】 . 【4】 . |
How many time has the film been watched on Youku? | 【5】 . |