Question

书面表达(10分)
今天星期天,4月10日.你和李明在家一起做老师课上讲的实验:将蜡烛放在装了水的盘子里,点燃一会儿后,上面盖上一个玻璃杯,蜡烛熄灭后,杯中的水面会升高。将这一实验过程以日记的形式记下来。(不少于60词)

Answer 1

Sunday, April 10
Today is Sunday. I stayed at home. Li Ming and I did the experiment that the teacher told us in class. We put a candle, a glass and a dish on the desk. We filled the dish half full of water. Put the candle on the dish, and then lit it. After the candle burned for a few minutes, we put the glass over the candle. After the while the candle stopped burning, and the water inside the glass rose. How interesting science is!

试题分析：这题是要点作文，就是要求考生根据要点内容进行翻译，不能遗漏。根据要点内容可知要用简单句，包括主系表结构，主谓宾结构。写作时要灵活运用，叙述客观性动作一般用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。
点评：要点作文因为要点已经很明确，只要将要点翻译清楚就可以，要注意使用英语的句型翻译，可以避免出现汉语表达。