Question

【题目】书面表达

下表是希望工程在2006年西部某一省区所取得的成就。请你根据表中所给的信息写一篇题为“Project Hope”的短文，字数在50-60字左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入词数。要求行文连贯、通顺、正确，语言表达清楚。

What Project Hope has done in a province in 2006
Money Project Hope has raised	28,593,346 yuan
Students it has helped	5036
Schools it has built	62
Books it has bought	3,452,141
Clothes it has given	5,000
People who have taken part	367,403

Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money ----28,593,346 yuan.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money ----28,593,346 yuan.The money has helped 5,036 students.The money has been used to build 62 schools.We use the money to buy 3,452,141books.We have given 5,000 clothes to the poor people.So far,367,403 people have taken part in the Project Hope Activity.

【解析】

试题分析：小作者首先要认真阅读表格里的内容，需要注意语态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如The money has helped 5,036 students.The money has been used to build 62 schools.We use the money to buy 3,452,141books.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。