Question

Jim 是一名中学生，现在的他与两年前有很大的不同。请根据提示完成作文,80词左右。

Two years ago	Now
a primary school student	a middle school student
short,thin,quiet	tall,outgoing,a little heavy
hardly exercise	exercise every day
like junk food	like ,fruit and vegetables drink milk,healthy
lazy	more hard-working, get better grades

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Jim is now a middle school student, but two years ago he was a primary school student. He is quite different from what he was two years ago. He was short, thin and quiet then and he hardly did exercise, while now he is tall, outgoing and a little heavy because he does exercise every day. He likes eating healthy food now, for example , fruit and vegetables and often drinks milk instead of junk food. He’s more hard-working than lazy. So he gets better grades than before.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态， 要求写现在和过去的差别，应该分别用一般现在时和一般过去时说明现在和过去的情况。人称用第三人称Jim。注意认真阅读材料，分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还运用了different from; for example；动词的-ing形式做宾语等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如：because，and， but， so等等。

考点：提纲作文。