Question

【题目】书面表达(计10分)

根据下面的表格，谢一篇关于发明的短文。80词左右，内容可适当发挥。

Inventions	Who	When	Where
telephone	Bell	1876	U.S.A.
car	Carl Benz	1885	Germany
paper	Cai Lun	105	China

Answer 1

【答案】

There are many inventions that have caused great changes in the world.Here's a short introduction. For example, telephone was invented by Bell in U.S.A. in 1876. For the first time, people could talk to each other over great distances almost as clearly as if they were in the same room.In 1885, car was invented by Carl Benz in Germany. It is a common transportation in our life.It is convenient for us to go somewhere. What's more,paper was invented by Cai Lun in China in 105.It makes our life more and more meaningful.It's one of the greatest inventions in the world.

What useful inventions they are!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，所给材料比较详细，提示词关键到位，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中要注意人称、语态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把与写作相关的内容进行归纳整合，文章内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。