Question

11．初中的学习生活即将结束，三年来，在与同学们的交往中，有让你感动的瞬间吗？有哪些事始终让你记忆犹新？本期学校的英语角为即将毕业的同学们开辟了"Say you，Say me"专栏．现在请你根据下面的内容提示自拟提纲，用英语写一篇短文．．
内容提示：（1）Who is he or she？
（2）What did he or she do？
（3）What did you learn from what he or she did？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）词数在80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；．
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名，姓名请使用Daming或Lingling代替．
Here I'd like to say somethingabout Tom，one of the best students in my mind．You may feel surprised and wonder why．To some students，Tom is not best at his study．He is naughty，and sometimes even not well-behaved．But have you noticed Tom has carried the lunch boxes for us for three years？It is also Tom that makes the computer work whenever there is something wrong with it in class．
So it is easy for a person to do one kind thing，but keeping doing kind things for others is quite difficult．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇通过提问给出提纲的作文．内容为描述在三年的初中生活中让你感动或记忆犹新的事．时态为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．写作要点包括：1．介绍所描述的人；2．他或她做的事情；3．从他或她的行为中所学到的东西．
常用到的重点句型和短语：
would like to do想要做某事
one of the 形容词最高级+可数名词复数形式   最…之一
It is…that 强调句型"正是…"
it is adj for a sb．to do sth．对某人来说做某事是…
keeping doing 坚持做某事
参考句子：
I want to say something about Daming．我想说一些关于大明的事．
You may feel surprised and want to know why．你或许感到惊奇并想知道为什么．
whenever it doesn't work in class．在课堂上无论它什么时候坏了．

解答 Here I'd like to say something about Tom，one of the best students in my mind．You may feel surprised and wonder why．To some students，Tom is not best at his study．He is naughty，and sometimes even not well-behaved．But have you noticed Tom has carried the lunch boxes for us for three years？It is also Tom that makes the computer work whenever there is something wrong with it in class．
So it is easy for a person to do one kind thing，but keeping doing kind things for others is quite difficult．

点评 这是一篇给出以英文给出题目和提纲的作文．考生需细心钻研提纲材料，弄清提纲的思路和旨意是写好提纲作文的前提．审题时，首先要认真阅读、仔细分析提纲材料．然后在提纲的基础上巧妙构思，合理的展开全文．本作文考生可按提纲顺序以三段形式开展自己的作文，且要注意中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范．