Question

【题目】书面表达（满分20分

请以“The Changes to My Hometown”为题。根据下表中的内容要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。

十年前	现在
空气好 山青，水绿 生活贫困 房子矮小 走路、骑自行车进城	污染严重 很多高楼大厦 住房宽敞、明亮 乘公共汽车、出租车进城 许多人有自己的汽车
希望家乡更好

要求：语言通顺，条理清晰； 基本无语法及拼写错误；80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

The changes to my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. We could hardly see the blue sky. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There is less pollution than before.

When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportion conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. It took a lot of time. As time goes by , those has changed. TaiZouStation andTaiZou Airport have been in use for several years.There are many ring roads People usually go to work by bus or by train even by plane.

It was hard to keep touch with others in the past. But now we can talk on the phone, we can also surf the Internet to send mails or to chat on line. It is very esay.

Now we live a happy life .To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown . I hope my hometown will be better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求对比介绍家乡的过去和现在。主要用到一般现在时和过去时态，注意used to 的应用。

写作亮点：这篇短文要点全,句式应用较多例如It was hard to keep touch with others in the past，To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。