Question

假设你叫Daniel，三年前随父母来福州，请你用英语写一篇题为“我眼中的福州”的文章，内容要点如下：1）福州是个美丽的地方，有许多名胜古迹，每年吸引许多游客；

2）福州最近几年发展很快，道路两旁高楼林立；

3）但是也存在一些问题：房价太高，不少人买不起房子；水和空气受到污染；

4）我希望…… （至少2点）

注    意：文章必须用一段话包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。词数80个左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My name is Daniel. I came to Fuzhou with my parents three years ago. Fuzhou is a beautiful city with many places of interest. They attract many tourists every year. Fuzhou has developed fast in the past few years. There are many tall buildings on both sides of the roads. However, there are also some problems. The price of the new houses is too high. Some people can’t afford them. The water and the air are polluted. I hope we will take action to protect our environment. We should try our best to make Fuzhou a better city.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，描述自己眼中的福州。本题给出了详尽的材料,但在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，描写福州过去的情况时，应该主要用一般过去时，描写福州现在的情况时，应该主要用一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词或短语，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子，如came to、places of interest、try our best。句中的时态使用恰当，还有简单的从句，都使文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。