题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
根据提示写一篇短文,70个词左右。
提示:1. 林涛和王军是邻居,他们每天一起乘地铁上学、回家,在学习上也互相帮助,他俩是好朋友;
2. 今天是星期天,他们不去上学,他们去动物园;
3. 从他们住的居民楼到动物园有10千米,所以他们坐公共汽车去;
4. 动物园里动物很多,他们玩得很高兴。
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【答案】
Lin Tao and Wang Jun are neighbors. They go to school and come back home by subway every day. They always help each other .They are good neighbors and friends . Today is Sunday. They don’t go to school. They go to the zoo. It’s about ten kilometers away from their building to the zoo, so they go to the zoo by bus. They’re very happy to see so many animals. They have a good time today!
【解析】
试题分析:本题是一个给定提纲的作文。根据提纲要求,短文要介绍一些有关林涛和王军上放学的情况、周末活动的情况等等。短文用一般现在时态,三人称形式。短文要注意词汇的选择、句型的选用,用正确的英语句子结构形式,避免汉式英语。同时要注意谓语动词的正确形式,注意主谓一致。注意句式的多样性及复杂句式的选用,使短文生动具体。
写作亮点:本范文包含了提纲提示的所有信息,条理清楚,内容完整。语言通顺,语法正确。Be动词和行为动词运用恰当。Be away from,be happy to do sth及have a good time等等短语的准确使用,为短文增色不少。总之,这是一篇写得很好的范文。
【题目】阅读下面的短文,根据短文内容完成表格(每空词数不限)。
I have a lot of problems recently(最近). First, I’m not happy in class. I’m so shy that I’m afraid of speaking in class. Secondly, I argued with my best friend. I’m very worried because I have few friends. I don’t want to lose her. Thirdly, I feel nervous as the exams are coming. And even I can’t sleep well at night.
Yesterday, my mother took me to the doctor. I told the doctor my problems and he gave me some advice. He asked me to make more friends who look friendly and play games in the free time, so that I’m not shy. He also said, “if you don’t want to lose your best friend, you should talk with her. Tell her what you think and you are the best friends again.” Because I can’t sleep well, he asked me to eat some healthy foods for sleep. And he asked me to relax. I’m trying to follow his advice.
Problems | Advice |
Too shy to speak in class. | To make more friendly friends and 【2】 |
Had an argument with the best friend. | To 【3】. |
Too nervous 【1】as the exams are coming. | To eat some healthy foods for sleep _【4】and relax. |