题目内容
【题目】书面表达。(20分)
上周末我们和刘老师一起乘长途汽车去了首都北京。根据提示,完成短文。
places of interest | 天安门广场 、长城 、 故宫 、 王府井大街 |
Activities | 1.拍照 2.享受美味食物 3.购买礼物4…….. |
feelings | 自己发挥,至少2句。 |
要求:1. 给的要点要写全,不少于80词。2. 语句通顺,有逻辑性,要有适当的发挥。
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【答案】
Last weekend, We went to Beijing, the capital of China with Mr / Miss Liu by coach. We visited many places of interest there .
On the first day, we went to Tian’anmen Square. It is wery big, we couldn’t stop taking photos there. Then we saw many wonderful works of art at the Palace Museum. On the second day, we climbed the Great Wall. After that we were very tired but happy .Before we went back, we bought some presents and enjoyed delicious food at Wangfujin Street.
Beijing is a wonderful place to visit, I hope I can visit it again.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文给出了写作的提纲,在写作时要构思好文章的结构,注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整,表达准确,注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点:这篇作文结构清晰完整,表达准确流利,要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如It is wery big, we couldn’t stop taking photos there. Then we saw many wonderful works of art at the Palace Museum. On the second day, we climbed the Great Wall. After that we were very tired but happy .Before we went back, we bought some presents and enjoyed delicious food at Wangfujin Street.等等。
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