Question

我市将承办2014年第15届省运会，为此组委会委托某英语报社向全社会征集建议，假设你是李平，请联系实际，就“政府部门，市民(citizens)及学生该为办好这次盛会做些什么？”提出建议．

 

 

 

要求：

1.根据所提供的信息，给该报社写”一封建议信；

2.词数：80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Dear Editor ,

My name is Li ping , a middle school student . I’m excited to know that the 15^th Games of Fujian Province will be held in our city in 2014 . To make it successful ,

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Yours ,

Li Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Editor,

 My name is Li ping , a middle school student . I’m excited to know that the 15th Games of Fujian Province will be held in our city in 2014 . To make it successful , the government is supposed to build more new gyms for the players and take more measures to improve the environment Of our city. Besides, the citizens ought to be polite and ready to help others. They had better talk with others in Putonghua. They should try their best to keep the city clean and tidy. As students, we should do more exercise to keep fit and try to be volunteers of the Games.

 In a word, if everyone makes a contribution, the Games will be more successful.

                                                                         Yours,

                                                                         Li Ping

【解析】这是一篇应用文写作，写一封建议信。给出的材料比较简略，故动笔前先要认真阅读提示，根据要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，为了使说明更具逻辑性，适当使用序数词。