Question

根据所给提示,写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的假期之旅。
假如你是Mary，刚结束暑假旅游回到学校，请你讲述一下你的假期之旅。提示：
暑假里乘飞机和父母去北京旅行。
第一天，去了故宫拍了许多照片。
第二天，去了长城看到许多旅客并了解许多关于长城的知识。
最后去了王府井购物，买了许多纪念品。
谈谈这次旅行的感想。

Answer 1

Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our summer holiday. We took the plane there. It’s a fast and comfortable journey。We went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and we took a lot of photos there. 
On the second day of our trip, we went to see the Great Wall. It was a famous view in the world. It was very great; we saw a lot of tourists. We listened to the tour guide, and knew a lot about it.
At last we went shopping in the city center of Beijing---Wangfujing Street. We bought a lot of souvenirs.
We enjoyed our trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

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