Question

才能展示场（计10分）

以第一人称的手法按以下提示用英语写一篇题为“A Happy Trip” 的短文。80词左右，文章开头已给出。

在假期，完成作业后和好朋友John一起去爬山。

好朋友John又高又瘦，留短发，戴眼镜，最喜爱旅游。

坐公交车去旅游，到达目的地后开始爬山。

山上有美丽的花及动物。

吃野餐（have a picnic）并拍照。累但玩得很开心。

A Happy Trip

On holidays, after I finished my homework

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Answer 1

A Happy Trip

On holidays, after I finished my homework，I went to the West Mountian with my good friend named John last Sunday. John was tall and thin with short hair.He often wore glassess.His favourite is travelling. When we got near the West Mountain by bus, we were very exicited. We walked to the top of the West Mountain. There were many green trees and animals. The air is very fresh on the mountian. At last we reached the top. We had a picnic there and took lots of photos there, too. Then we went home.Though we were very tired, we were very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求以第一人称来写一次去爬山的经历，因为爬山发生在过去，所以句子的时态应该用一般过去时，写作时不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如walk to；have a picnic; take lots of photos等；用了一些连词when，though等，使句子结构更加复杂。增加了文章的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。