Question

【题目】根据英文提示，以“怎样学好英语”为题写一段小文章。要求不少于50词，内容必须包括英文提示中的要点。

Be interested in English； listen to the teacher carefully； practice speaking English both in class and after class； keep diaries in English； learn some English songs by heart

Answer 1

【答案】Learning English is not an easy thing. So if we want to learn it well, we should spend much time practicing speaking English in class and after class. Besides, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Go over what we have learnt and finish doing our homework carefully. What's more, be interested in English. We'd better learn some English songs by heart, read English stories and newspapers and keep diaries in English.

If we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will be good at English.

【解析】试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以“怎样学好英语”为题写一段小文章，内容必须包括英文提示中的要点。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如So if we want to learn it well, we should spend much time practicing speaking English both in class and after class. Go over what we have learnt and finish doing our homework carefully.条件状语从句If we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will be good at English.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。