Question

假如你是北京阳光中学八年级学生Nancy。以My school life为题，写一篇短文向你在英国的笔友介绍你的学校生活。
要求：1.提示内容必须要写。
2.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，注意意思要连贯。
3.词数80字左右，开头结尾不计入总词数。
要点： 1．上午8点开始，下午4点结束。
2. 一天6节课，学习各种科目，如：语文，英语，数学，地理，美术……
3.学校有餐厅，中午在学校餐厅吃饭，饭后同学互相聊天或听音乐。
4.课后作业不多,有时间进行课外活动，到图书馆借书，操场做运动。
5.每周五下午参加社团活动(club)，最喜欢the Reading Club,可以从家带书，可以和同学讨论书籍。
My   school life   
Hi,I’m  Nancy. I am a Year 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
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Answer 1

 
I always have fun at school.
My school starts at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. .We have six lessons every day. At school, We learn all kinds of subjects, such as Chinese, English, Maths, Geography, Art  and so on. 
There is a dining hall in our school whrer we have lunch After lunch, we often chat with each other or listen to music. Because we don’t have too much homework after class, we have time for after-school activities. We can borrow books from our library or play sports in the playground.
Every Friday afternoon, we go to clubs. My favourite club is the Reading Club.
We can bring in books from home. We can also discuss the books with our classmates.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者向在英国的笔友介绍自己的学校生活。全文主要用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如at school, all kinds of,such as,and so on.,have lunch ,after lunch,chat with each other,listen to music,after class,after-school activities.play sports , go to clubs, bring in等短语，文中还用到了定语从句There is a dining hall in our school whrer we have lunch ; 原因状语从句Because we don’t have too much homework after class,。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。