Question

请根据提示，以 Computers 为题写一篇文章
1. 电脑工作和余暇生活中的重要性。
2.电脑在许多方面的使用。(in factories，in hospitals,…….)
3.电脑的优缺点
要求: 1.文章必须包括以上主要内容和提示词，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
2.80词左右。

Answer 1

Computers  
Computers have become very important in many areas of work and leisure.
Advantage: In space, computers help astronauts control the speed and direction of a spaceship. Doctors can find diseases easily and solve other problems. In factories, robots controlled by computers can do work that is dangerous to humans. In business, computers are used to place and cancel orders. At home, people can use them to play games, watch movies, do shopping and business, communicate by sending e-mails and chatting online.
Disadvantages: If we work computers too long, we may get headaches or sore eyes. We won’t have enough time to study or exercise. Not everything we read on the Internet is ture or good for us
In short, computer helps us at work and at home, but they must be used properly.

这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇短文介绍电脑。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点。通过阅读材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。