Question

某英语杂志社举办以“科学饮食，健康生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，以“The healthier, the happier”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的生活方式，参加比赛。
要求： 1. 词数80-100；2. 条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；
3. 不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。

以前的生活方式	如今的生活方式		感 悟
	内 容	对健康的影响
不吃早饭，吃太多的快餐；看太多的电视，过多地玩电脑游戏……	饮食	至少两点	至少一点
	睡眠
	锻炼
	心理健康（倾诉、放松）

The healthier, the happier
In the past, I                                                                                                                
                                                                                                                             
But now I                                                                                                              
                                                                                                                           
                                                                                                                           
I think                                                                    
                                                                                                                      

Answer 1

“The healthier, the happier”
In the past, I used to eat a lot of junk food, hardly ever do some exercise. So I am very fat, and always get ill.
I began to realize it is important for us to keep healthy.
Now I hardly ever eat junk food. In my free time, I take part in many sports. Thus I became more and more healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? I think if you do as the following ways. You will be healthy as me.
First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat.
Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We should try to do more exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, The healthier, the happier.

解析试题分析：
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一二人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:hardly ever几乎从来不；It is adj for sb to do sth，对某人来，说做某事怎么样；take part in 参加；had better do sth最好做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
考点：考查提纲类作文