Question

7．你的家长或老师可能经常和你谈学习问题．请你叙述一次你的家长或老师对你谈学习的情景、内容以及你的感想．
要求：1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息．
2）内容完整，书写整齐．词数80-100．
When I was in Grade 7，my English was very poor．I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．One day，Mrs Zhang，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me．She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice．This helped me a lot．I became confident from then on and made much progress．I believe my English will be much better in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是叙述一次你的家长或老师对你谈学习的情景、内容以及你的感想．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从两个大的方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．家长或老师对我谈学习的情景、内容
2．我的感想

常用到的重点短语：
so…that如此…以至于…
give up放弃
ask sb to do sth让某人做某事
from then on从那时开始
make progress取得进步
in the future将来
高分句型：
I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．
句中的even表示甚至，加强语气，说明上文说到英语差的程度，这里还有what引导的宾语从句．
I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．
so…that表示如此…以至于，that引导的是结果状语从句．

解答 When I was in Grade 7，my English was very poor．I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．（高分句型）I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．（高分句型）One day，Mrs Zhang，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me．She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice．（情景和内容）This helped me a lot．I became confident from then on and made much progress．I believe my English will be much better in the future．（我的感想）

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．