Question

请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

背景	1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的 2.走向社会后没有感恩意识 3. 行为方式令人担忧
学会感恩	1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会 2.感谢父母...... 3.感谢老师...... 4.......

小词典：enter society进入社会sense of thanks感恩意识

要求：1．短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数：90词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3．演讲稿中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。

Good morning, boys and girls!  The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”…

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. Because of society, we can have a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our country more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，短文已经给出开头和结尾.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉

考点：应用文写作

点评：本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。