题目内容
【题目】书面表达 (本大题共5分)
假设你是李华,在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生动物保护俱乐部) 招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown,申请加入该俱乐部,并表示,如果能加入,将会很开心。请根据表格信息和提示完成申请信。
学校 | Sunshine Secondary School |
年级 | 八年级 |
品德 | 勤奋, 乐于助人 |
爱好 | 篮球和旅游,从小喜爱动物 |
申请理由 | …… |
联系方式 | 0510—87654321,lihua@sunshinetown.com |
注意:1.词数70左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.信须包括所有要点,申请理由用2-3句适当发挥;
3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I
hope to do something for animals.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me on 0515-87654321 or e-mail me at lihua@sunshinetown.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,李华写给野生动物保护俱乐部主席布朗先生的一封申请信。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I would like to...;I am ...;I hope to...;I will be....等句式的运用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达了期望收到布朗先生的回信的意愿。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头李华介绍了自己想要加入野生动物保护俱乐部,接下来介绍自己的基本情况:身份、性格、爱好,最后介绍了自己的联系方式。此处on the Internet,would like to do sth, love doing sth, hope to do sth, look forward to doing sth 等这些词组的运用以及if引导的条件状语从句 if I can be a member of your club.的运用也让文章增色不少。
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