Question

最近，“中国式过马路”成为网友热议的话题。下面的漫画反映了部分中国人闯红灯过马路的现象。请根据漫画内容请以“Keeping safe on the roads”为题用英语写一篇词数80左右的短文。
内容要求：
1. 描述漫画内容，并对该现象作简要评议；
2. 提出至少两点“安全过马路”的建议。
提示词（可选用）：
a group of, cross, sidewalk, obey the rules, traffic lights, be careful

Answer 1

Keeping Safe on the Roads
Many people are not careful when crossing the roads. As we can see in the picture, a car is running while a group of people are crossing the road even if the red light is still on. Running the lights is dangerous and it may cause accidents. How can we keep safe on the roads?
First, we should obey the traffic rules and not cross the roads until the “walk” sign turns green. Second, stop and look both ways before crossing the roads. Third, walk along the sidewalks. (88 words)

试题分析：考生首先要认真看图并认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一些征求建议的语气的表达方式。根据所给单词的提示，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文主旨分明，点名了文章的中心思想。开头指出现在现在人过马路不遵守交通规则的现象。第二段提出了安全过马路的建议，we should obey the traffic rules and not cross the roads until the “walk” sign turns green.这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。最后点名了中心思想。