Question

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother.______

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。根据提纲内容可知，本文可分三段来写，第一段对人物的介绍主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，第二段用一般过去时，第三段用一般将来时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如of medium build with long black hair、from piano lessons to dancing lessons，状语从句When I grow up、when I was a child 、even though she didn’t have much money和after I graduate from college，宾语从句whatever I needed for my study和 what I can to make my mother happy，定语从句The person I love most is my mother和that make her look still young，表语从句what she wants most， 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：话题作文。