Question

Ann 和Anna 一样高，Anna比Ann外向，但是Ann的成绩比Anna好。
Ann 和Anna都很健康，因为她们每天都锻炼，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且从不吃垃圾食品。
上个周六，她们和同学们一起骑车去人民公园（the People’s Park）玩了，上午做游戏，下午拍很多照，玩得很开心。
Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.
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Answer 1

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna. They both are healthy because they take exercises every day. They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food. They lead a healthy life.
Last week ,they with his classmates went to the People’s Park.. They played  a game in the morning  while they took photos ,which make them happy.  They had a good time.

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【亮点说明】本文提到很多不错的短语如 be good at 擅长做某事，lead a ..life 过着。。。生活，take photos 照相。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna这句话中while表对比，使这句话形成鲜明前后对比。They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food.这句话中and连接两个并且的谓语动词，时态保持一致。They played  a game in the morning  while they took photos ,which make them happy这句话中出现which引导的非限制性定语从句。