Question

请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。 标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There's a teacher Mr. Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of "why”.

We all love him more and more.

注意：

1．不得照抄短诗原文。

2．必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。

3．必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。

4．短文不能写成诗歌形式。

5．词数：80左右。

My Teacher Mr. Moore

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My Teacher Mr. Moore

Of all my teachers, I like Mr. Moore most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Mr. Moore has his own way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

【解析】

试题分析: 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的老师。本题所给材料是关于你的老师的小诗，故动笔前一定要读懂诗歌，然后结合诗歌内容适当发挥想象将诗歌内容表达完全，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。