Question

作文：（A）5分 老师如何评价我。转述各科老师对你的评价，至少五句话。

Answer 1

At the end of this semester, many teachers made some judgments on me. Here were some of comments from my teachers. My English teacher said that I could do well in English if I worked hard in the last term. My math teacher said that I did a good job and he encouraged me to work harder in next term. Also, My Chinese teacher told me that I should do some more reading to improve my writing ability. My chemistry teacher was so kind that he said that I was a hard-working boy. While, my history teacher reminded me that I should make much more efforts in this subject if I wanted to get a high mark.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇小作文主要注意两个方面。第一个方面，主语应该采用第三人称；第二方面，短文时态采用一般过去时。写作中要注意每一句的表达，适当使用连词。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: I could do well in English我能学好英语无规矩不成方圆；make much more efforts多多努力。创造浓厚的叙述氛围等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。