Question

节日是我们最喜欢的，节日期间会有很多庆祝活动。以My Favorite Festival 为题写一篇60个词左右的小短文。

要求：1.字迹工整，请大家不要用涂改液和涂改带。

2.句子简洁明了，意思表达清楚、准确。

3.注意句子的连贯性和逻辑性。

4.内容包括节日的时间、节日之前的准备工作、礼仪、饮食、礼物和孩子们的活动及表现等。

My Favorite Festival

 

 

 

 

 

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Answer 1

My favorite festival is New Year’s Day.I don’t have to go to school.I usually spend two hours on my homework and then enjoy myself.

On New Year’s Day morning,my mother goes to buy new clothes for us .She likes shopping best.My father dosen’t have to go to work.I stay at home to play computer games with him. The games are interesting and we get quite happy with friends on line.At noon ,we have a big meal of hamburgers and salad in KFC.I like them very much.And in the afternoon,we go to the countryside to visit my grandparents.I have no time to see them on weekdays. They’re very happy and give me much delicious food.I eat too much and have a stomachache.They all have a good laugh!

What a funny day it is!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文,要求写一篇自己最喜爱的节日的短文。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的动名词短语，注意动名词表示抽象的反复发生的动作,如have to，不得不；spend……doing花费……做某事；have no time to do没有时间做某事等.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲作文。