Question

请根据下面表格的资料，用第一人称写一段话，介绍你自己，所给材料必须全都用上。50词左右，不得出现真实的人名和班级。

Name	Jim Green
Age （年龄）	9
Class	Class 1, Grade 7
Family members	Father: Jack Mother: Kate
Favorite colors	Black and white
Favorite sport	Ping-pong ball
Telephone number	2685631

 

Answer 1

Myself

My name’s Jim Green. My first name is Jim, and my last name is Green, I’m 9 years old. I’ m a student. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. There are 3 members in my family: my parents and I. My father is Jack, and my mother is Kate. They are teachers. My favorite colors are black and white. My favorite sport is ping-pong ball. I often play it with my classmates after school. If you want to make friends with me, please call me. My telephone number is 2685631.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:first name 名字，last name姓，9 years old 9岁，my favorite colors我最喜爱的颜色，play ping-pong with my classmates 和同学一起打所乒乓球，make friends with 和……交朋友，telephone number电话号码等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：给材料作文。