题目内容
【题目】书面表达 (20分)
忙碌的初三生活已经开始,如何安排好自己的初三学习和生活呢?沉重的课业负担将取代一切吗?答案当然是否定的。如何合理安排自己的初三生活,你肯定有自己实实在在的打算。应该怎样完善自己,做到学习与生活两不误,请你以“How to be an excellent student”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:
1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校、不吸烟 ); 2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、多读书等);
3.在家帮父母做家务(1……,2……); 4.与人沟通、互相帮助;
5.参加志愿者工作(volunteer work),如…等
要求:
1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,省略部分适当发挥。
2.语句通顺、语法正确,80个词左右。
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
How to be an excellent student
Time goes by, now I am a student of Grade Nine.The life of the school is busier .I want to be an excellent student. But what should I do?
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【答案】
Time goes by, now I am a student of Grade Nine. The life of the school is busier .I want to be an excellent student. But what should I do?
At first I must obey the school rules. I will go to school on time and I will not smoke. To be an excellent student, it is important to have good study habits. I should listen carefully in class. I need to read as many books as I can. And I need to learn to relax.
Next I am going to communicate better with my teacher and classmates. Share something good with my friends and help each other. At home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework. I will wash the dishes and clean the room.
At last I will take an active part in the volunteer work as often as possible. And I will give school things to the school in the poor area.
I believe I will be an excellent and successful student
【解析】
试题分析: 这是篇提纲类作文,写作前要认真审题,确定人称和时态,可以用第一人称和一般现在时。作文要包含所列的要点,不能有遗漏,各要点间可以用适当的连接词,使文章更流畅和紧凑。各要点也不能逐字逐句翻译,可以加以补充使之更丰满和充实。
写作亮点: 这篇文章结构很清楚,要点齐全,表述准确。文章中对于各要点用了一些表达层次的单词,如At first首先;Next然后;At last最后。句中用了很多短语,如as … as I can尽可能…;try my best尽最大努力;take an active part in积极参加;as often as possible尽可能经常地。另外有一些长句子,如:To be an excellent student, it is important to have good study habits.成为一个优秀的学生,养成好的学习习惯很重要。