Question

假如你是Tim，你的朋友Larry感冒了，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封60字左右的电子邮件给他：给他一些建议，并祝他身体健康; 你的理想职业是将来做一名英语老师并说明理由; 你的英语老师给你的评语。(所给提示语必须用上)

Advice: go to see a doctor, take some medicine, do more exercise Dream job: an English teacher Reason: like English very much Your English report card: can do better

Dear Larry,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a cold. I think you should            
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
Yours，
Tim

Answer 1

(One possible version)
Dear Lary,
I am sorry to hear that you have a cold. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You had better do more exercise. By the way, I want to tell you my dream job. I want to be an English teacher in the future because I like English very much. And I got my English report card. My English teacher said I could do better. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Tim

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，然后应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。