Question

在过去三年的学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。

感谢	父母（给我提供幸福的生活，为我做了很多事情） 老师（辛勤工作；对我严格要求，让我努力学习） 同学（让我减少孤独，明白友谊的重要性；无法忘记一起度过的日子）
祝福	所有人身体健康、好运。

注意：1. 词数60-80词，围绕主题可适当发挥；
2. 文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名和校名。
参考词汇：友谊的重要性 the importance of friendship, 严格要求 be strict with…
In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them.                                                         

Answer 1

In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are working hard. They are strict with me and they make me study hard. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship. I will never forget the days we played and studied together.
Thank you, my parents, my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。