Question

【题目】书面表达。

从记事起，你就从电视上，书籍中看过不少的卡通故事，使你印象最深的卡通人物是谁，你为什么喜欢他，请写下来与我们分享一下。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hi everyone，today I will talk about my favourite cartoon .His name is Doraemon（多拉A梦） ．He was born on September the third ，2112.But he got the modern world by magic machine .Now he is living in a boy's home and making friends with the boy called Daxiong .The boy always meets problems .But Doraemon will help him in time. Doraemon loves Dousha Cake very much .He hates the mouse very much .When he won't eat his favourite food ， he will became very angry .

I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy .

【解析】

试题分析：这是一个话题作文。题目只给出了话题，但没有给出任何要点。我们需要做的首先是根据话题，发挥想象，确定要写的卡通人物。然后在写这个卡通人物为什么给了你最深的印象。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、but，以及频度副词，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。