Question

15．时间都去哪儿了？这是许多成年人的感慨，也是一些中学生的烦恼：没有时间做作业，没有时间从事个人爱好…
其实，时间就在我们的掌握之中，关键是能否合理利用．请根据提示，以"How to spend our time properly"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法．

注意：
（1）词数80左右．开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）内容必须包括上图中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
（3）条理清楚、语句连贯；
（4）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息．
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone？How should we spend our time properly？
As students，it is important for us to study，so we should make a plan for every day．Most of all，we should listen carefully in class．For homework，we need to make a list and work out how much time we need，and then finish them one by one．Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies．They can make us feel happy and confident．
But we don't need to spend so much time on them．So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies．
In other ways，we need time，too．For example，we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends．
If so，I'm sure we will live a happier school life．

Answer 1

分析 本题是对当下非常热的一个话题进行讨论，时间都去哪儿了，要求学生在写作的时候，要能突出总结"时间就在我们的掌握之中"，写作内容要充分解释如何合理的利用时间，时态以一般现在时为主．

解答 One possible version：
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone？How should we spend our time properly？
    As students，it is important for us to study，so we should make a plan for every day．Most of all，we should listen carefully in class．For homework，we need to make a list and work out how much time we need，and then finish them one by one．Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies．They can make us feel happy and confident．But we don't need to spend so much time on them．So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies．
    In other ways，we need time，too．For example，we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends．
    If so，I'm sure we will live a happier school life．

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，学生在写作时应仔细分析图表，引证典型数据并按提纲要求进行取材与构思．本题的关键是如何阐述时间和如何把握这个论点，说出应该如何利用时间．