Question

随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变， 购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购” 成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示， 写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点 (advantage)	1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累
2.价格通常比较便宜
3.可供选择的范围广，品种多
缺点 (disadvantage)	1.只看到图片， 看不到商品本身
2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西， 造成浪费
你的观点	……

注意：1）所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；

2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；

3）词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出， 不计入总数

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth.; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是网上购物的优缺点。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。