Question

【题目】学习方法、自我反思、合作交流、同伴互评是学习过程中几个重要的方面。其中，有效的学习方法能使你的学习境界大开，让学习成为一种享受。

在你初中几年的学习过程中，你一定会有好的学习方法与你的同伴分享，请按以下要求写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：

● your good learning methods

● an experience that you helped your partners

● your thoughts and feelings

要求：

1. 词数：80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当发挥；

3. 语法正确，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰；

4. 结构合理，词汇准确，书写清晰规范。

My Good Learning Methods

Good learners must have good learning methods.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good learners must have good ways. Discussing in a group really helps us have a better understanding of what we’ve learned. It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thought.

Shy and nervous, my classmate Jeff used to hide himself behind books. Answering questions in public was a quite difficult job for him. Once， our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult question. I encouraged Jeff to discuss his idea with us. We found his way was so creative. Then we advised him to write his answer on the blackboard and explain it to us. Believe it or not, he did it and we saw his great improvement after that.

Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me. Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning. By discussing, we learn more wisely and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇关于学习方法的写作，内容要包括好的学习方法，你帮助你的搭档的经历，以及你的感想。它可以写成一篇夹叙夹议的记叙文，用第一人称，时态根据实际情况用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时，注意表达的准确性和流畅性，可以加入一些连接词来加强文章的结构和逻辑性。

写作亮点： 这篇文章紧扣题目要求，对事情的描述非常清楚有序，而且文章用了不同的句式，如：Discussing in a group really helps us have a better understanding of what we’ve learned.句中用动名词做主语，of后接了个宾语从句。Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me.句中not only…but also…不仅，而且。